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Post (my) Poetry is WHACK!!! • Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:12 pm
This is mine to, professor...though this is probably too edited by now to be the same thing. xD

No, this is a topic with actual written content, in fact, this where be where any poem that I'm forced to write for my creative writing class! :P All for you to see how bad I'm at writing poems, and whatnot. This will, next semester also be the playground of all things written for Poetry Writing. :P

Yeah, maybe short stories will go into a different one, once he starts to assign those. Also, if you have any helpful hints to make it better (or critique, I guess...) go ahead and post. Also, if you just want to laugh or something you can do that too or whatever.

Anyways, first poem of the semester! (This is a Free Verse, I think) Get ready for the WHACK-ATTACK. lol.

I am a little luting flute
That squeaks when the tuba sounds
And plays bouncing notes

I’m that little monkey,
That’s mischievous and shouts, “BOO!”
But runs from its own voice…

I am a place crowded and overwhelmed,
And I’m a speeding yellow car,
Running away from where it had been…

I am also a soft sprinkling rain
And the rolling thunder coming after.

But, I am a strange, abstract shape
With its lines…confused and lost in its maze...

(so...so...overdramatic...or so thinks me.)

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Post Re: (my) Poetry is WHACK!!! • Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:36 am
me thinks you should stop talking in third person !

Was there any general type of poem you had to write? Or was it completely Free Verse?
Did it have to be short? Did you have to write 3 lines 3 lines 3 lines 2 lines 2 lines?

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Post Re: (my) Poetry is WHACK!!! • Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:08 pm
Ummm...the poem's in first person, and that was part of the assignment, and the poem is called an "I am poem" and is general free verse for the most part. :P

And one more crappy poem for you! xD

Comfort Within a Storm

The clouds are dancing with each other
they’re having quite a ball.
Later on at the stroke of twelve,
I see their guests clouding the sky
they think it’s time for a party.
They don’t know that we’d all rather be asleep.
For them the cold sea in winter
is all they need for invitation.
I know that I really don’t need
a stormy night, a night without sleep.
A golden sheltie sleeps on my feet.
like a soft, warm blankie.
And I hear a comforting melody
Safe in this place I love.

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Post Re: (my) Poetry is WHACK!!! • Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 9:30 pm
I've noticed you haven't posted for a while Tetromino, I assume your creative writing class has moved on... Speaking of which, I do enjoy your poetry but I think it would be more interesting to see your full fledged fiction you have had to produce in this creative writing class ;O. And you can't lie and say you have none, I have proof!

But it's completely up to you, I mean if I had one I would attempt to place all my works... maybe >_>

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