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 Untitled - Chapter 1... *Please help with this* 
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Post Untitled - Chapter 1... *Please help with this* • Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 8:24 pm
He'd been here about five days and on the sixth, he'd be trapped. That was the deadline before they assumed parental consent according to the rule of this place, wherever that was. Unless his parents spoke to the people in charge and brought him out, he would never leave this void. . .
Gen wasn't even sure why he was in here in the first place. He was quite average, he made nothing higher than a B on most of his classes, and wasn't particularly "gifted" or talented, so he couldn't think of any reason he would be here. His parents as far as he knew were just working-class civilians who worked for our country, not as soldiers, but as office workers in the government. Having been tired of that and wanting to start a family, they retired from their military career after the war. So there wasn't much trouble they could have been in, could there? He was at a friend's house when they got him, they told him that his parents had been in an accident, and that they would take care of them until they were better, and they took him here. They said that his parents would have been out by the time the deadline came, and if not, they would have been dead. This particular thought filled him with dread. That feeling was unshakable, but he wanted to be rid of it...

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Post Edited: Untitled - Chapter 1... *Please help with this* • Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 2:16 am
What can you do but think when you get yourself stuck in a hole? That's what seemed to happen here, she couldn't help but do so when she got here about two months prior. She'd been told that her parents were dead, an unlikely story as they'd both been military trained and not very old. Even after they left active duty, they continued to push their limits, and they always kept some form of weapon easily at hand but not in plain sight. So it must have been some lie they came up with to fool her into going with her, she wanted to see so badly if they were actually alright or not when she was told this unbelievable story. That's when they took her here, they didn't explain to her anything except that this would be a new kind of orphanage, either. She would have to think of a way out of here, and being the daughter of two people considered the best of the best in just about every field there was, that would be easier than it might seem being trapped in a hole...

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Post Untitled - Chapter 1 of her story... *Please help with this* • Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 2:26 am
What can you do but think when you get yourself stuck in a hole? That's what seemed to happen here, she couldn't help but do so when she got here about two months prior. She'd been told that her parents were dead, an unlikely story as they'd both been military trained and not very old. Even after they left active duty, they continued to push their limits, and they always kept some form of weapon easily at hand but not in plain sight. So it must have been some lie they came up with to fool her into going with her, she wanted to see so badly if they were actually alright or not when she was told this unbelievable story. That's when they took her here, they didn't explain to her anything except that this would be a new kind of orphanage, either. She would have to think of a way out of here, and being the daughter of two people considered the best of the best in just about every field there was, that would be easier than it might seem being trapped in a hole...

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Post Re: Untitled - Chapter 1... *Please help with this* • Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 10:49 pm
Gen wasn't even sure why he was in here in the first place. He was quite average, he made nothing higher than a B on most of his classes, and wasn't particularly "gifted" or talented, so he couldn't think of any reason he would be here. His parents as far as he knew were just working class civilians who worked for our country, not as soldiers, but as office workers in the government. Having been tired of that and wanting to start a family, they retired from their military career after the war. So there wasn't much trouble they could have been in, could there? He was at a friend's house when they got him, they told him that his parents had been in an accident, and that they would take care of them until they were better, and they took him here, they said that his parents would have been out by the time the deadline came, and if not, they would have been dead. This particular thought filled him with dread. That feeling was unshakable, but he wanted to be rid of it...

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For all internet purposes, my name is Gigasaero.

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Finally! :onfire:
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